That Inferior Feeling…

A small verse for those who are being criticized by people…and just to get appreciation they pretend to be someone they are not.


Once again I stand alone

With no one of my own

Just a chilled bad breeze

Of cold words the spoke

The words which were false tried

To make me pretend someone else

They were unfamiliar with the truth

That i am a selcouth

They say I am paranoid

And just left me devoid

Led me to silent sinking

With just this empty feeling

I tried to pretend what I am not

But there was nothing that I got

They kept on speaking cold words

Pushing me deep in my fears

And that inferior feeling

Had made itself feel like home

Taking away my strength

Leaving weakness in my soul

So here I am standing alone

Alone just about to faint

Don’t know how to fight for right

With this empty strength

But then something strange happened

The surroundings lighten up…

My instincts told me something fun

“There’s a valley in front, lets go and run!”

Of course no one wants to die

Asking me? Yea i am the same

I wanna live my life my way

Well, don’t want money or fame

Cause I know ain’t not so great

Just being a bit feisty

And I won’t die unless I live

My dream life and make a story

Now I am happy that inferior feeling

Has made it feel like home

Cause that feeling and my past

Gave me strength to live alone

I’m proud of what I’ve done

And promised to never look back

It made me who I am

And for this I won’t regret

That regret feeling is worser

It doesn’t teaches us anything

Just gives a luxurious car

And takes you to the pain…never ending.

Life’s cocktail of different feelings

Each feeling with different flavour

Let the tasty ones flow into your life

And savour this essence forever…


4 Comments Add yours

  1. Manessah B. says:

    I cannot begin to describe how much this poem resonated with me. It’s truly a wonderful feeling when we finally realize that being alone isn’t such a bad thing, because you learn so much about who you are and grow to embrace it. I love this poem! Beautifully written! 😁

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    1. Honey8 says:

      Thank you my dear friend. And i cannot begin to describe these words mean so much to me ❤ i recommend you to read more of the poems here.. they are all alike. Yes we learn to love ourselves, the most important thing 😇 i am glad you liked it dear, stay Áwêßómé and keep smiling 😊✨
      Have a great day ahead ⛅😉
      Lots of love ❤

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      1. Manessah B. says:

        You are very welcome! You have a beautiful gift with words, so please don’t stop sharing it. Thank you for the well wishes, my friend. I hope you have an amazing day, as well! 😁

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      2. Honey8 says:

        Thank you.. i feel blessed ✨ this is all because of you all 😇 thanks for appreciation and motivating me to write more .. you all have created me..
        Sure I’ll ✨❤ 😊

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