I’m the Master of my Seas…

Here’s a poem about a girl named Elice. A great tragedy happens with her but she finds inspiration from nature.

For some it’s nightmare, for some it’s real

You may feel every word and sentence from here

She was little broken, little puffed up with fear

Didn’t knew how this sinking feeling got near

Call her Ella, real name was Elice

It was fine day and she was home alone

Her parents went to little get-together

And she was talking to a friend on her phone

That time home landline ringed

There was a news that made her mind swing

Her heart beat stopped and mind went black

News- her parents went of a car crash

She ran to healthline as fast she could

Talked to doctors and nurse

They told her parents were in cabin 27A

And apologized that they couldn’t be saved

She cried and wept, there was nothing she could do

Mom’s touching care, the love that was true

Dad’s teachings and paths he showed

Ella recalled everything as she soaked

She had no siblings. This only child

Was inspired by nature in a dark night

Walked on the road out of the health line

The road had different scent that night

It was dark as coal and just moonlight shown

Ella was silent as cold wind soared

It was lone road, no man in sight

Just trees and buzzing insects of night

She trodded a dead leaf as walked on

Stepped back, picked up and frowned

Dead leaf taught her greatest truth

“Nothing’s eternal, it’s a mortal world

It’s a mortal world, everything has time

Everything dies after they sing their rhyme”

Ella gave a sigh and walked on

And saw an owl on the branch

It was beautiful and white as snow

And something made her eyes glow

“What if you’re different? Nothing’s wrong

Love who you are and where you are from

There’s nothing you need to prove others

You are beautifully imperfect & it never bothers”

Ella walked on and came to a place

She stood in in a clearing with moonlight on her face

Felt like she’s standing on the centre stage

Facing outside world, away from her cage

The essence she got was

“The life’s sometimes dark, but light is never dead”

Ella came to a river bend

It was covered with mist and scent

The night lear engraved in her mind

Until she completes her rhyme

She washed her face

Along with disgrace

Stood up brave and said

Audacious’ words ahead

“I shall rise and live my life

Make my own future indeed

Being feisty, I shall strive

Yea, I’m the Master of my Seas!”


29 Comments Add yours

  1. milomi10 says:

    Your poem is amazing in a way I cannot describe. The story that you weaved was something I can learn from. Just the way when we are broken from inside, but at a certain point of time, we always fix ourselves. Our scars still show, but what weโ€™ve learned is greater. It was inspiring to read.

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    1. Honey8 says:

      Your words mean world to me ๐Ÿ’• you made my day! Thank you! i am happy i could make a difference and you were inspired. Stay strong my friend ๐Ÿ˜Š life’s amazing. It teaches us right things at right time. Lot’s of love and good wishes to you โคโœจ


  2. Angel McQueen says:

    Truly speaking, i couldn’t stop tears rolling down my eyes when I read this……. It’s just too intense and beautifuly written.๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’•

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    1. Honey8 says:

      You know what, my first ever creation of lifetimes still shines above everything. This work was something that started Everything. After i created this, i wanted to create more like this.. but this was so exceptional for me, i end up writing my first short story “seasons”

      Let the tears flow my dear. Maybe all your scars, hurt everything flows away, takes you one step ahead to that happy blog. ๐Ÿ˜Š See, she gathered strength from nature, so can you.. she choosed to be brave ..
      This is my best work forever. You don’t know it means so much to have such comments.

      Much love and kindness. Thanks a lot! โค๐Ÿ’•โœจ

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      1. Angel McQueen says:

        Really, I can’t believe that was your first creation.. that’s really well written………….. I am out of words..

        I think that blog was something I really needed to read in times like this. Thanks for being so supportive.๐Ÿค—

        And, you are welcome ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ’•โค๏ธ๐Ÿ˜‰

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      2. Honey8 says:

        I am out of words… That grateful feeling is overflowing. I am glad i could help you.. that’s what i like to do, spread Inspiration.. i am glad i succeeded ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ’•โœจ

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  3. Pina Marek says:

    Oh my, this is just… I don’t even have words, this is amazing. Thank you for sharing it with us, thank you for being able to read it!

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Honey8 says:

      I am soo grateful you loved it dear! โคโœจ Thanks fr reading. Tbh it’s my first but the best as well. Stay inspired dear ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ˜„

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  4. Really thoughtful words Honey ๐Ÿ˜Š. What was your inspiration for this post ?

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    1. Honey8 says:

      Thanks friend ๐Ÿ˜Š yea it was my first ballad ever. Nothing i am just a great nature lover. Everything in nature inspires us about smthg. So yea, i just made up a story and then flowed them into verses ๐Ÿ˜Š
      I was so happy to write my first ballad, literally dancing like mad person ๐Ÿ˜‚
      Thanks a lot! โคโœจ So Happy you liked it! ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—

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      1. Well itโ€™s really good ๐Ÿ˜Š. I have conveyed about your blog in comments of your latest post. Have a look at it and reply me back ๐Ÿ˜‡

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      2. Honey8 says:

        Just did. Thanks for making my day damn awessoomee!!! ๐Ÿ˜ƒโค

        Liked by 1 person

      3. You are welcome Honey ๐Ÿ˜Š

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  5. Hi, am happy to to include you here for this award. I nominated you for the mystery blogger award. Here is the link to check the procedure



    Peace and Love

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Honey8 says:

      Thanks a lot for the nomination friend ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š I’ll post my answers soon!


  6. robertcday says:

    Hi, Honey – I wanted to see what your first post on the blog was like and so I came here.
    Love the way that you handle emotions with such a sure touch and am liking your deft use of metaphor.
    You truly are a master of your seas. ๐Ÿ™‚
    Kindness – Robert.

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    1. Honey8 says:

      Thanks a lot dear friend! ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿค—โœจโœจSo happy you liked it!
      I actually wrote it around a month ago before making my website. When i made this website I thought i should post it here.. it is my first ever creation in writing. And i really love the way it is! ๐Ÿ’• It’s like some different Happy Connection with it ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒโœจ

      Thanks a lot! Everyone are master of their own seas ๐Ÿ˜Š just need to realize that and enjoy life! ๐Ÿ˜€

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      1. robertcday says:

        You’re a blessing on the world of creative writing, เคฎเคงเฅ. ๐Ÿ™‚

        Liked by 1 person

      2. Honey8 says:

        That is a big compliment!!! And my native language lol ๐Ÿ˜‚ thanks a lot dear! ๐Ÿ’žโœจ

        Liked by 1 person

      3. robertcday says:

        Most welcome, เคฎเคงเฅ. ๐Ÿ˜‰

        Liked by 1 person

  7. Alexi says:

    wow very powerful, I felt every word come alive when I read them. Keep it up

    Liked by 2 people

    1. Honey8 says:

      Thanks friend! Glad you could connect with it! ๐Ÿ˜€

      Liked by 1 person

      1. Alexi says:

        Your welcome friend ๐Ÿ™‚

        Liked by 1 person

  8. Wow….just ok….you are 15. You so good….

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    1. Honey8 says:

      Thanks. I am 16 now. ๐Ÿ™‚
      I am glad you liked it. โœจ


      1. Yeah i like it…very cool…..16…..wow… You good………
        Sweet 16 lol……inspired write up..keep it up

        Liked by 1 person

      2. Honey8 says:

        Thank you. Sure i will ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ‘


      3. Ok….nice one…..

        Liked by 1 person

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