Here’s a poem about a girl named Elice. A great tragedy happens with her but she finds inspiration from nature.
For some it’s nightmare, for some it’s real
You may feel every word and sentence from here
She was little broken, little puffed up with fear
Didn’t knew how this sinking feeling got near
Call her Ella, real name was Elice
It was fine day and she was home alone
Her parents went to little get-together
And she was talking to a friend on her phone
That time home landline ringed
There was a news that made her mind swing
Her heart beat stopped and mind went black
News- her parents went of a car crash
She ran to healthline as fast she could
Talked to doctors and nurse
They told her parents were in cabin 27A
And apologized that they couldn’t be saved
She cried and wept, there was nothing she could do
Mom’s touching care, the love that was true
Dad’s teachings and paths he showed
Ella recalled everything as she soaked
She had no siblings. This only child
Was inspired by nature in a dark night
Walked on the road out of the health line
The road had different scent that night
It was dark as coal and just moonlight shown
Ella was silent as cold wind soared
It was lone road, no man in sight
Just trees and buzzing insects of night
She trodded a dead leaf as walked on
Stepped back, picked up and frowned
Dead leaf taught her greatest truth
“Nothing’s eternal, it’s a mortal world
It’s a mortal world, everything has time
Everything dies after they sing their rhyme”
Ella gave a sigh and walked on
And saw an owl on the branch
It was beautiful and white as snow
And something made her eyes glow
“What if you’re different? Nothing’s wrong
Love who you are and where you are from
There’s nothing you need to prove others
You are beautifully imperfect & it never bothers”
Ella walked on and came to a place
She stood in in a clearing with moonlight on her face
Felt like she’s standing on the centre stage
Facing outside world, away from her cage
The essence she got was
“The life’s sometimes dark, but light is never dead”
Ella came to a river bend
It was covered with mist and scent
The night lear engraved in her mind
Until she completes her rhyme
She washed her face
Along with disgrace
Stood up brave and said
Audacious’ words ahead
“I shall rise and live my life
Make my own future indeed
Being feisty, I shall strive
Yea, I’m the Master of my Seas!”
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Your poem is amazing in a way I cannot describe. The story that you weaved was something I can learn from. Just the way when we are broken from inside, but at a certain point of time, we always fix ourselves. Our scars still show, but what weโve learned is greater. It was inspiring to read.
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Your words mean world to me ๐ you made my day! Thank you! i am happy i could make a difference and you were inspired. Stay strong my friend ๐ life’s amazing. It teaches us right things at right time. Lot’s of love and good wishes to you โคโจ
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Truly speaking, i couldn’t stop tears rolling down my eyes when I read this……. It’s just too intense and beautifuly written.๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
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You know what, my first ever creation of lifetimes still shines above everything. This work was something that started Everything. After i created this, i wanted to create more like this.. but this was so exceptional for me, i end up writing my first short story “seasons”
Let the tears flow my dear. Maybe all your scars, hurt everything flows away, takes you one step ahead to that happy blog. ๐ See, she gathered strength from nature, so can you.. she choosed to be brave ..
This is my best work forever. You don’t know it means so much to have such comments.
Much love and kindness. Thanks a lot! โค๐โจ
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Really, I can’t believe that was your first creation.. that’s really well written………….. I am out of words..
I think that blog was something I really needed to read in times like this. Thanks for being so supportive.๐ค
And, you are welcome ๐๐โค๏ธ๐
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I am out of words… That grateful feeling is overflowing. I am glad i could help you.. that’s what i like to do, spread Inspiration.. i am glad i succeeded ๐๐โจ
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Oh my, this is just… I don’t even have words, this is amazing. Thank you for sharing it with us, thank you for being able to read it!
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I am soo grateful you loved it dear! โคโจ Thanks fr reading. Tbh it’s my first but the best as well. Stay inspired dear ๐ค๐
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Really thoughtful words Honey ๐. What was your inspiration for this post ?
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Thanks friend ๐ yea it was my first ballad ever. Nothing i am just a great nature lover. Everything in nature inspires us about smthg. So yea, i just made up a story and then flowed them into verses ๐
I was so happy to write my first ballad, literally dancing like mad person ๐
Thanks a lot! โคโจ So Happy you liked it! ๐๐ค๐ค
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Well itโs really good ๐. I have conveyed about your blog in comments of your latest post. Have a look at it and reply me back ๐
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Just did. Thanks for making my day damn awessoomee!!! ๐โค
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You are welcome Honey ๐
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Hi, am happy to to include you here for this award. I nominated you for the mystery blogger award. Here is the link to check the procedure
https://wordpress.com/post/patrickrealstories.wordpress.com/1070
Cheers.
#PATRICKSTORIES
Peace and Love
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Thanks a lot for the nomination friend ๐๐ I’ll post my answers soon!
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Hi, Honey – I wanted to see what your first post on the blog was like and so I came here.
Love the way that you handle emotions with such a sure touch and am liking your deft use of metaphor.
You truly are a master of your seas. ๐
Kindness – Robert.
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Thanks a lot dear friend! ๐๐คโจโจSo happy you liked it!
I actually wrote it around a month ago before making my website. When i made this website I thought i should post it here.. it is my first ever creation in writing. And i really love the way it is! ๐ It’s like some different Happy Connection with it ๐๐โจ
Thanks a lot! Everyone are master of their own seas ๐ just need to realize that and enjoy life! ๐
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You’re a blessing on the world of creative writing, เคฎเคงเฅ. ๐
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That is a big compliment!!! And my native language lol ๐ thanks a lot dear! ๐โจ
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Most welcome, เคฎเคงเฅ. ๐
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wow very powerful, I felt every word come alive when I read them. Keep it up
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Thanks friend! Glad you could connect with it! ๐
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Your welcome friend ๐
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Wow….just ok….you are 15. You so good….
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Thanks. I am 16 now. ๐
I am glad you liked it. โจ
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Yeah i like it…very cool…..16…..wow… You good………
Sweet 16 lol……inspired write up..keep it up
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Thank you. Sure i will ๐๐
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Ok….nice one…..
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